MY TURN :)

Oh well, here goes.

Girl wakes up from a coma. She can understand what she's told, whatever blah things. She's told that she was involved in a car crash, and that her parents are dead. But she says no, that's not possible, because she can see, out of the corner of her eyes that her parents are there. The doctor sends her for therapy, but it doesn't work. Over the course of the next two weeks, she starts to see and hear people that aren't there. Her friends think she's crazy and leave her. Finally, one day while walking home from school, alone, a man approaches and suddenly her vision darkens, like in the evening. She turns and runs, and the man corners her in an alley. His eyes are red and she can smell his breath. Suddenly he keels over and dies, and she looks up to see a shadow disappearing into the darkness, then it is bright again. She wishes she hadn't seen that, because after which, she is involved in a crime investigation group called Paranormal. This group investigates the things that civilians don't see everyday; the ghosts, the hauntings. Of course, as per plot line, she gets into tons of trouble, and she lives happily ever after.

Wrong.

There's a twist, but it's part of the story...


FEEL THE SUSPENSE.

6 comments:

  1. *suspence falls on top of Bones*
    Yeah, I feel it :)
    Sounds really interesting!

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  2. AWESOME BB
    It sounds EPIC
    I soo wanna read that
    Your story is about a MEDIATOR they are soo COOL!!

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  3. SUSPENSE!
    :D

    Really awesome plot line!

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  4. AHHHH suspense suspense suspense!!!!
    ~cries~
    Awesome-saaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuuce!

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