My- not so triumphant- return to writing!

Hi guys.

So, I've rewritten the first chapter of The Origin. I know it's shit, but I would appreciate if you read and helped me to improve it, AS I can't. :L

So, The Origin, chapter 1 is HERE.

Thanks guys! *hugs*

P.S. Sky, I'm really sorry about the Halloween Comp. I really wanted to do it :( I didn't have time, sorry.

But IS it okay if I write one and put it up, ANYWAY?


~Flame :)