Lil's Story (Post 1)

Before I begin with the post, I'd just like to say sorry to NJ... I'll miss you too, but I might comment ffrom time to time... and if something really big happens, I'll inform you guys... :) And Gepard... make me ;)


Right guys, in this, I'm just gonna be telling you all what my story's gonna be about! This will be me beggining a new book, but I'm almost done with the first, and until I finish it, I think I'll be able to handle two! This might even grow into a full-on series! I have BIG plans for this... It'll be called...

Earthbound Angel


It's basically a time in the future where all that's left of the earth are a few floating islands, and a murky fog of dust that obscures all view of whatever could be out there. The reason for this, is years ago, when the world was at war (again... gawd, we're SOOOOOO violent!), and the government got together a secret group of scientists. They were set to work on the "Dark Beast" project. The aim was to make a weapon that would deafeat all of their enemies. They were trying to create a human, who was able to change, or "Bio-Morph" whenever their body figured it was needed. For example, if they were thrown into a desert, their body would automatically change them into something that could live without water for months, much like a camel, but improved drastically. But tests were made... and people were changed, and the things that were left over were more beast than man... One of the scientists, Arthur Kinney, realised that they were getting nowhere. He got angry, and tried to get rid of the research so that the others would stop, before they went too far with the Dark Beast project... but then he spotted something that changed everything, and he had the answer. He took home what he needed, and worked in secret, calling his new tests the "Angel Project". He spent months finishing it off, then he finally found a volunteer to test it on. His name was Rowley Craig. Arthur was unable to do the experiment at home, so late at night, he let Craig in, and strapped him up, begginging the experiment. The army burst in, as they had found out about his secret project. They began to drag him away, trying to shut off the machinery for the experiment, but it was too late, Craig was too far changed already. He woke, and the army bagen to take him away with Arthur, but his new instincts kicked into action, and he fought them away. Basically, he ended up making his first change, one that gave him a massive, muscled body, that made him almost bear-like. (Here comes the technical part XP) The pain was excruciating for him though, and with his new extreme powers, his cries shook the earth, making it explode outwards violently, creating a gravitational void, and sending the tectonic plates of the earth into the air in multiple pieces. (I'll sort out the details later ;) I know it's REALLY impossible, but c'mon, it's a fiction book!) People were thrown about, and whoever from the Earth's population were left still alive only had ruins left to bring their lives back from. Rowley Craig was now also up there, and, as his second change, he grew wings. Already more used to it, he knew what was happening, and did his best to control it, but he still couldn't stop more madness, on the tiny island he was left on. He fell off the island... but the change completed as he fell, and so he was able to fly back up to safety. In the end, people on this island managed to build houses more, and they created a new life. Rowley got a new family... and his children too, had wings. Many years later, there have been more and more descendants of "The Angel" with wings. But every generation, there is one person thought of as the "True Angel" as they are the descendant of the generation with the most "true" blood. Other than that... the only extra point to know is that the creatures that were made in the Dark Beast project end up as these evil creatures that wander the fog around the islands, and sometimes take people if they go too far from the normal towns.
The main characters are Karen and Leroy who both have wings, and Kevin and Tia, who don't. They're all best friends, and basically, Kevin gets taken by the creatures... the rest... *winks* spoilers...

Tell me what you think please! Good, bad, stupid, or completely and utterly a total moron's idea! I wanna know!