I've set this off for much to long

  OK, a lot of you have commented on my story draft (see below-Viviannas Story) and said you would like to be in it. I'm delighted, and honored, but there is one problem. Names.
  NOTE: I am making your apperance WHATEVER I WANT. I do not care what your O.C. looks like.
  So, uh, I need to come up with some fake names for those of you who commented. So far I have;
   Gepard Valk- I'm gonna' keep your name. Good evil name.
   Skyril- Your names gonna' be Winter. You'll know why if you read down...;)
   Octa- Oliver
   Lillith- Keeping name
   Ayesha- Hazel
   Dogs Like Bones- Max. Max can be a girl name to!
   Kallista
   N.J.-Keeping name
   Mar Chu- Riley
  Darkane
  Rachel- Keeping name
  Thaila- Alexandra
  Venice-
 So, those are them. If you would like to be in my story, The Meliorate Project, please comment your character status (good or bad)
 And Octa, Ayesha, Kallista, Darkane, please comment the names you would like in the story. They need to be slightly normal. :)
  I'm going to post the powers of the people listed above. Note; In this book, magic is something stemmed from the Genetic Code in the DNA. I can't explain because I don't want to spoil, but here are the powers.
  Valeria Maddison Nuit- (My character. Main) Controls nature. Nothing more to it.
  Gepard- Sorry, but you don't have any in this particular story. Your a soldier of the army, and one that is in charge of Cell 713.
  Skyril- Aha! I have figured it out! Your power is, you can freeze the moisture in the air. BAM!
  Octa, or Oliver- You, my friend, can turn into pretty much any animal. But it's a rather painful process.
  Lillith- I got the idea from the mythical creatures Sirons. You can screech and knock people out cold, but you can only do it for minutes at a time.
  Ayesha, or Hazel- You can see through walls and solid objects. You can see through people, and almost anything.
  Dogs Like Bones, or Max- You can make objects fly to you.
  Kallista- You can feel peoples mood through their thoughts. You can't really read their thoughts, but you can sense if someones feeling hostile, or peaceful, etc.
 N.J.- You can talk to animals. Whenever your outside, they, like, flock you.
 Mar Chu, or Riley- You can screw with the force of Gravity. You can't completely make it disappear, but you can lessen it in certain places and sort of float.
 Darkane- Yours is fun. You can melt. Like, really, melt. So you can melt, go under doors, and then un-melt.
 Rachel- You can create a sort of force-field bubble. But it takes complete peace and concentration.
 Thaila, or Alexandra- You can run super super fast. Like, a blur.
 Venice- You can blend in with your surroundings. Like, a lizard thing. Watchamicallitt. Cameleon.
   Just so everyone knows, those listed above are all going to be in the little group of Gifted kids that refused to help with the Meliorate Project, blah blah blah, and I can have, like, a couple more people in it. Bad guys, are probably going to be  soldiers in the army, blah blah blah, don't want to spoil everything. I'll just say this is the first time I sat down and planned for a book, instead of just running into writing. Like, I usually just come up with things as I go on. Not this time. (Has anyone else noticed that I say 'like' a lot?)
  One more thing. I need advice on whether I should write in First-Person or Third-Person. If you could all be so kind as to comment little pro's and con's on writing in either one, I would be most grateful.
  So yes, that's all I have to say. (For now)