tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post444834994620383322..comments2023-05-22T00:36:35.128-07:00Comments on Writers Rule The World: HelpSkyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07957221088712534264noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post-33657973290141663542012-05-06T06:39:21.921-07:002012-05-06T06:39:21.921-07:00Oh, sure thing. I'll add you again in just a s...Oh, sure thing. I'll add you again in just a second!<br /><br />Thanks, by the way. I'm glad you liked it, but what part confused you? The story scene??Skyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957221088712534264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post-76498278531949514682012-05-06T04:12:12.802-07:002012-05-06T04:12:12.802-07:00Oh, it looks like i did have time.
I really liked...Oh, it looks like i did have time.<br /><br />I really liked the 12 years earlier. Im intriuged by This agent woman. I think it could be a great story.<br /><br />the only probelm i have, is the story scene. It confuzzled me a little. <br /><br />And, i need to post something. But i will soon.<br /><br />Flame out.Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplayinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768308250017988884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post-26463920519553159432012-05-06T04:06:10.318-07:002012-05-06T04:06:10.318-07:00SKYRIL.
I know this is gonna sound ruse, but i di...SKYRIL.<br /><br />I know this is gonna sound ruse, but i didnt read the post. Sorry, But iw ill, and ill tell you what i think. I dont have time now.<br /><br />But could you, maybe. possibly, Add me here again, but under a different email?<br /><br />FlamePhoenix25@gmail.com<br /><br />Please and thanks.Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplayinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768308250017988884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post-16457921724758982542012-04-23T11:39:12.048-07:002012-04-23T11:39:12.048-07:00Awesome! Thanks guys! I'm going to try to make...Awesome! Thanks guys! I'm going to try to make better the stuff y'all mentioned.<br />I'm really glad you both liked it mostly, though. :]<br /><br />And by the way, Red, by "plain" you mean not mysterious enough or something like that?<br /><br />~huggies back~ :DSkyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957221088712534264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post-28674059690359332492012-04-21T23:20:27.332-07:002012-04-21T23:20:27.332-07:00Ooooooh, I like this. It's well written, but I...Ooooooh, I like this. It's well written, but I agree with Mar about the fighting scene. I know it's only beginning, but Winfred and Jeffrey are kind of plain, for now. They're adorable together, but not in a couple-ish way, which I think is a good thing. I really really liked the 12 years earlier part. SO WELL WRITTEN!<br />*huggies* I want moaaar!Red Waterfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11536738183673147461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3471433468613230939.post-26898599424440041132012-04-21T13:23:49.815-07:002012-04-21T13:23:49.815-07:00....Cooooool. It's so interesting. WHat's .......Cooooool. It's so interesting. WHat's beyond the gates? Who's the agent chick? Why Did they take Jeffery? SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!<br /><br />The only problem I had was the fighting scene. I had trouble following it and picturing it in my head. But beyond that, I want more of it!Mar-Chuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14975265849410982620noreply@blogger.com